THREE WEEKS LATER
From the mainland, Jagged Island looked tiny, but as the boat speeds toward the rocky cliffs, I see that it’s much larger than I thought.
It must be, to fit a whole amusement park, hotel, and restaurants on it.
Large hills and hoops of wooden roller coasters jut out of the ground and stretch high into the sky.
Sharp black rock that looks as if someone has carved vertical shards from the surface frames the island. The amusement park sits high off the water. Waves crash against the cliff face and white foam races back into the sea.
Trees are sparse on the island but the few there are full of bushy green leaves. From here, the park is dark, wooden, and void of color.
Even with the blue ocean and clear, sunny skies, the island appears more gloomy than glamorous. I kind of like it. The Magic Kingdom isn’t my thing.
Our boat jumps over choppy water as we hurtle toward the jetty. I grip the side of the boat as my butt leaves the padded seat I’m trying to sit on.
“This looks creepy as hell,” Ava says. Ava as in BeautyFulAva. The TikTok girl who my cousin is obsessed with and who my parents want me to be more like. Absolutely not going to happen. Before I left, Ellie made me promise to ask for her autograph, but so far, Ava’s been a total brat.
Her contoured face twists in distaste as she stares at the island. Her glossy blond ponytail whips behind her in the wind. She’s as sharp as in her videos, savagely rating brands that don’t live up to her expectations. Her reputation for brutal honesty gets her a lot of attention.
Here, it might just get her hated.
We’re not her followers.
When we arrived at the harbor, she dragged three large bright pink suitcases on board the boat and acted offended when Gibson, our rather hot driver, questioned if she needed it all. I’m trying to not judge her too harshly, but she’s referred to Gibson as “the help” twice and we’ve only been on the boat for fifteen minutes.
He looks ready to throw her overboard.
“Nah, this looks awesome,” Liam replies. Liam is a gamer, though from his appearance and muscular physique he seems like more of a jock. He has a dominant personality and perfectly styled brown hair. I focused on him straightaway. It’s hard not to.
His YouTube channel is massive and he’s TikTok-famous—his TikTok has exploded. He’s a big fan of any game with violence and hits back at negative comments in the way a jock would—with complete and utter annihilation of his opponents.
He’s gorgeous and probably wouldn’t give me the time of day if we went to the same high school.
“No,” Ava says more forcefully. “It’s creepy. Who’s going to look at an ad for this place and want to come here…besides goths, freaks, and serial killers?”
I wonder how much trouble I’d get in if I shoved her into the water. I doubt Gibson would care.
James wraps his arm around her shoulder. “I’ll look after you.”
It won’t be the rough sea that makes me hurl.
Ava smiles up at him with her flawless bat-winged eyes. James is a movie buff. He reviews them, makes them, dissects the continuity, and rarely rates anything higher than three stars—his only five-star review last year was for Squid Game. He’s tall and on the skinnier side, but you can tell he works out between all that movie-watching. He has striking features. His jaw is squared, his eyes are a very dark blue, and his hair is blond and curly. He’s the only guy wearing aftershave. It’s strong, woody.
And he makes Ava giggle a lot.
I don’t know what she was expecting. The invitation was black with intricate red and gold gargoyles etched into it. All gothic and perfect and authentic.
The aesthetic is so on brand for me.
A couple days ago, I covered the tragic, historic story of five-year-old Maggie, who was murdered at the Rocky Point Amusement Park in Rhode Island. It created a buzz among my followers. Half of them are saying a private island is the perfect place for murder and the other half thinks I’m crazy to stay somewhere I can’t leave immediately if I want to.
It’s only perfect if no one but you and your victims know you’re there.
I’m sure I’ll find an edge to the resort; the gothic vibe will help.
We’re almost there now. I have to tip my head up to see the island. A few birds circle above like they’re searching for prey.
This weekend we get to check out the park, spend time on the rides, and hang out at the hotel spa and pool. Then Malcolm is hoping we shout great things and send all our followers to the island.
The invitation described the resort as unconventional and extraordinary. One of a kind.
The boat leaps over another wave.
My stomach flips.
Gibson is the only one who doesn’t look slightly green as we rock over choppy water. He steers the boat and smiles into the sun as we cut through the sea. His eyes are hidden behind dark aviators.
I think he’s around our age, maybe a year or two older. His earlier use of “sup” when he helped us onto the boat threw me a bit, but he’s fresh-faced and dressed in jeans and a white T-shirt. His light hair is cut quite short with a shaved line down the side.
He looks happy. Like he could race around on the ocean all day and never get bored.
Beside me, a girl named Harper grips the edge of the boat. She’s a book blogger. She reads at least one book a day and posts so much on TikTok I can’t keep up with her. But her reviews are awesome, and we had a short conversation a few months ago when she raved about a true-crime novel that I later devoured.
Her skin is dark, and her Afro is tied on top of her head. She smiles at me with her bloodred lips and pulls a well-read thriller paperback out of her bag with her free hand. The pages are so curled at the edges that it’s not a surprise she doesn’t mind the odd splash of water on the cover.
I’m not convinced reading’s going to help her nausea.
“It’s funny,” Harper says. “I’ve swam almost every day of my life. We spent two years living in the UK, where I swam the English Channel. England to France—not all at once, like some more hard-core swimmers. But you spend all that time in the water and a boat still makes you feel sick.”
“Impressive,” I say. “How old were you?”
“Fifteen. We moved back to the States soon after. My dad did the swim too.”
“Wow. I love swimming, but I wasn’t good enough to make my school’s team,” I tell her.
“My parents don’t accept anything less than impressive. Or, rather, perfection.” She rolls her eyes and clings harder to her book.
“Why does it look depressing?” Ava says, her voice grating. She’s gripping her long ponytail and twisting it around her hand. “I’m supposed to be living it up in luxury, not slumming it on a grim, run-down island.”
“It’s not grim,” Gibson says.
Will, who’s mostly remained silent, finally speaks up. It’s not surprising that it’s a reply to the very hot Gibson. “Nothing weirds me out.”
Ava mutters something inaudible, but from the look on her face it probably wasn’t kind.
Will’s a rival beauty blogger with a slightly larger audience than Ava’s. That must be killing her. He has shiny brown hair, a fake tan, dark eyes, and smooth skin I would literally kill for.
I snap a picture of the ominous setting for a TikTok I’ll post after Malcolm takes us on the island tour. Which the itinerary boasted would happen right before we check into our rooms.
The top of the hotel comes into view. Constructed from stone with sharp points, two turrets, and carved gargoyle, the hotel is stunning. The six of us get it all to ourselves for a long weekend. We hit the jackpot.
Each of us has more than 500,000 followers. Liam is at 499,900, so he’ll be joining us soon—probably by the end of the weekend.
The second I found out who else was coming, I did my research. I’m probably most like Harper and Liam. Though we’re from wealthy families, our follower counts are higher than our bank balances.
“So, is this rich dude a psycho or something?” Will asks casually.
Ignoring the strong urge to push him off the boat too, I reply, “Just because he appreciates Gothic architecture doesn’t mean there’s something wrong with him.”
He flashes his fluorescent white teeth. “Course not, crime girl.”
He’s done his homework too.
If I wanted to be petty, I would tell him his foundation doesn’t match his skin color, but one, I’m not petty, and two, it’s as perfect a match as Blake Lively and Ryan Reynolds.
Instead, I look away. It’s not the first time someone has insinuated that I’m strange. My mom regularly tells me to blog about something else. “You’re too cute and friendly to cover such a dark topic, Paisley.” As if you needed to be hideous with boils all over your face and a missing front tooth to report on crime.
News flash: plenty of serial killers are good-looking and act friendly.
There is no “type.”
Gibson slows the boat and throws the rope to a man on the jetty who’s so gorgeous he doesn’t look real.
This is a resort for wealthy and beautiful people.
“Welcome to Jagged Island!” says the man, easily catching the rope. “I’m Reeve, head of maintenance. You’ll see me more this weekend since the island is running a skeleton crew until we open to the public.”
Reeve is tall with dark skin, and his muscles have muscles. He has the darkest eyes I’ve ever seen in my life and cheekbones so sharp they could cut through steel. He’s sort of a slightly older version of my ex-boyfriend, but I won’t hold that against him.
“Thanks,” I say as he helps me off the boat. He gives me a Hollywood-worthy smile, and I trip over my own feet.
Smooth.
Ducking my head, I focus on tugging my suitcase out of the way of the others getting off the boat and not on my burning cheeks.
Why do I blush when every cute guy looks at me? I am such a loser.
At least Reeve has made more than just my head turn. Will, Ava, and Harper also do double takes and smile at him hopefully. We’re all sixteen and seventeen, so I don’t think he’s going to give any of us a second glance. He’ll probably forget we even exist when we leave on Monday.
He claps his hands. “If you all want to follow me, I’ll take you to Malcolm.”
I guess Malcolm doesn’t come to greet his guests.
We walk up the ramp next to the steps. Both are long, winding, and carved into the island. Sweat beads at the nape of my neck as I wheel my suitcase behind me.
Ava has Reeve pulling two of hers. She just handed them off to him. I could never be so bold.
Even Reeve’s irritated expression is cute.
Ava had asked Gibson to take her stuff, but he has to take some staff back to the mainland. Something about orientation this week but them not being needed over the weekend. She brightened when he said he’d be back in around an hour; James just sulked. I got the feeling he was used to girls falling all over him.
“At least I don’t need to go for a run today,” I say as we climb the slope that seems to stretch on forever. My bag gets heavier with each step I take.
Harper grunts. “I brought books with me. This hurts.”
“What do you set your Goodreads challenge to?”
“Three hundred and fifty a year.”
“Wow. I can only manage about fifty.”
“Are they all crime?”
“Mostly. Lots of nonfiction.”
“Hey, I run too if you want to go out together tomorrow?” she asks.
“That sounds good. I lost my running partner when my brother moved to college.” I grin over at her. “How incredible is this place?”
“Right? I didn’t want to say anything in front of the princess. Can’t be bothered with the drama.”
I like Harper already.
I switch hands and tug the case to the top. That’s when I get my first real look at the park. It’s exactly what you’d expect of a theme park, except it went heavy on stone and dark wood.
Reeve unlocks a large gate with sinister-looking gargoyle heads carved into the pillars. On the other side of the gate is a white cart professing the best ice cream in the world and largest choice of toppings.
A little bit of fun to lighten the darkness.
The roller coasters are all on thick wooden tracks that conceal the metal ones so the aesthetic of the park isn’t compromised.
A group of staff members passes us, heading to the boat. They’re all wearing dark navy shorts and red polo tops. They look us over as if we’re a circus act.
My parents weren’t happy that the island wasn’t fully staffed, but it doesn’t need to be. You don’t need hundreds of people working for six guests.
Blaine convinced them to be happy that the owner and his assistant would be with us. And that this was an opportunity that came once in a lifetime—and that I’d managed to get all on my own.
I wish I had his powers of persuasion.
“It’s cool, but this place is kinda weird,” Harper says, looking around.
I open my mouth to reply but Reeve beats me to it, explaining that Malcolm wanted an exclusive park with a unique angle. A theme park for the rich, but he didn’t want it dripping in gold and diamonds.
No glass and mirrors and caviar.
That was overdone, apparently.
“Malcolm grew up traveling the world, but it was his visit to the Burgos Cathedral in Spain when he discovered his love for the Gothic era,” Reeve explains as they walk up the cliff.
I get the feeling that his speech is rehearsed. Part of the orientation. Watch a video about the new boss’s life.
I can imagine how enthusiastic the staff was to learn about a billionaire’s private-island dream while they’re probably getting paid twenty dollars an hour to serve guests and control rides.
Reeve leads us around a corner, past the entrance to a rather adult-looking poltergeist train. “I’m definitely going on that later,” I mumble to myself.
And then I look up and, holy hell, that must be Malcolm. Standing at the thick double-pointed-arch wooden doors of the hotel is a tall, lanky man with curly black hair and a pipe. He’s wearing a long burgundy coat—despite the summer heat—and a black turtleneck.
He spreads his arms wide. “Welcome to my island.”
